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Old/Quiet/Simplistic > Abstract (I hope this would count as "Abstract"...)

For :iconshinotamatakemuro:'s photography contest :heart:

Contest info: HERE


This is a little old wagon that mom put out in the front of our house. We came home from the store today and I liked the way the sun looked on it at that certain time, so I took a picture of it.


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~Aoshi-dono Mar 11, 2008
I like it for the most part, though maybe consider a more interesting composition? I really do like the directional line, I like how the plant is almost at the same angle as the wagon handle. The repetition of the horizontal lines from the house siding and wagon work quite well together as well. Like I said I just would possibly change the composition so that the wagon wasn't dead seat in the center of the image. There should be other ways to distinguish it as the focal point of the image.

( :x I hope this kind of Critique isn't out of place...Sorry if it is.)
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~Vegeta-Holic Mar 12, 2008
Mm, I understand what you're saying. I would have made it a little different, but I have this almost-OCD thing about centering objects and what-not D8;
Thank you, though :heart:

(It's fine |D)

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~Aoshi-dono Mar 12, 2008
xD I used to love centering stuff too...and then art school happened.
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~Vegeta-Holic Mar 12, 2008
LOL. I see xD;

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~Aoshi-dono Mar 11, 2008
=A= I hate that emote why does dA change text into them. I don't want to be angry lol.
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~BlackDragonBloodLust Mar 10, 2008
>>;;;;....

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~Vegeta-Holic Mar 11, 2008
Wut :|

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~BlackDragonBloodLust Mar 11, 2008
nothing XD its cool

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~"EVERYONE GET ON TOP OF ME NOW!"
~"I don't wanna bite this- Don't write that down."
~All that is necessary for the triumph of Twilight is for good men to do nothing.
-You've never seen the lonely me at all-
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~ShinotamaTakemuro Mar 10, 2008
Defiantly constitutes as Old, nice photo =)

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~Vegeta-Holic Mar 11, 2008
Thank you :heart:

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